ThunderClan warrior

[kindreadsoul]

Name: Kindreadsoul
Age: 20 Moons
Gender: Tom
Desired Position: Warrior
Clan: ThunderClan
History:

Kindreadsoul was born in ThunderClan as a young kit, his mother was Starshine (deseased) and his father was Darkheart (also deceased) he has a tempermental nature and is quick to defend ThunderClan in time of need.

Short Description: Dark haired tom with Red flecks
Appearance :

His eyes are bright red around the rims, and flicker in the moonlight. He was born with albino eyes since his mother was an albino. She had white fur and red eyes. His father had black fur and brown eyes. His muzzle is tinted with red flecks and is long and pointed, teeth are sharp but average.

Personality:

Quick tempered, only in battle, when defending his clan from attack. Other wise Soul is quite calm and laid back. He's great with its but doesn't have a mate. Sandstorm his mate earlier on died of a tree fall in a storm. (Friend who rped her killed her off in my guild and created a new one) Other than that, Soul has been quiet ever since.

Code: StarClan will watch over us
RP Example:

Kindreadsoul, awoke in the middle of the night to find, the leaves blowing in the wind around his paws. He had fallen asleep outside the Warriors den again, and heaved himself up. Looking around he narrowed his eyes, checking to make sure nothing had been upset, while he was asleep. Everything seemed calm, and neutral so he lumbered on into the warrior’s den, turning around to make himself more comfortable he lay himself down on a bed of moss and leaves. His stomach growled but he knew he would have to hunt for the clan before himself.

Other Account:

[//MoonShadow\\]

It's a good start, but I'm afraid everything needs to be a few (3-4) sentences longer.

Keep up the good work! <3

[.:¾AutumnStar:.]

Yes moon is right, you need to add quite a bit more.

[GoldenPaw]

I think now u only need 2 do more on the History